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A Little Update


Okay so I thought I would give everyone a little update on how this blog is coming and how I plan for it to work in the future.  First of all I should let you guys know that pulling everything together is going to take some time.  I have to reformat a lot of my stories so getting older content up is going to be a long running process.

Anything I have written will not be posted in the main feed, for lack of a better word.  Instead you will be able to find older content under Fan Fiction.  I plan, as I did today for Quidditch Lesson, to post any new chapters in the feed, but to also put them in the appropriate page under Fan Fiction.  This way you will be able to read new things off of the feed and still be able to easily find my older stores.

As for Quidditch Lessons itself, I am working on getting the first 55 chapters up, but again… Dude 55 chapters.  Also I plan to combine several chapters into one page.  I think that will make it a bit easier to read, and I won’t have a 1000 pages once all is said and done.

On to what I have gotten done!  All of the published chapters of Smell of Submission are up!  Chapter 12 is about half way done and I think I will be posting it sometime tomorrow.

Finally… On to a nervous announcement.  I have started to write an original story.  Because you know, my muse doesn’t think I am busy enough.  It doesn’t really have a title yet, but I can tell you a little bit about it.  It takes place in a modern fantasy world.  It is a story where the supernatural beings are hidden from human eyes, but they do live very modern lives.  This is an erotica story with heavy BDSM themes, and it is a darker setting.  I am not sure when I will have the first chapter up, I am much more nervous about posting it than I have been about posting my other work.


Chapter 56: Spring Holiday


Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Warning: The following chapters contain graphic sexual content and general smuttiness

Rating: MA

Spring Holiday

A few weeks passed and soon students were getting ready for the spring holiday.  Luna received a letter from her father saying that he wished to spend the break in South America looking for a Boltnose Nesslpot and he wished for Luna to join him during her time off.  Both her boyfriend and her Master agreed that she would have to go, but neither of them were happy about it.

As Ron lead her to a compartment in the train she glanced down the hall to see her Master watching her from afar.  He had agreed to let her ride home with her boyfriend, with a promise that he would punish her for it when they saw each other again.

“I hate the way ferret is always looking at you.”  Ron said as he pulled her down next to him on the seat.

“What?”  Luna frowned, she had no idea Ron was that perceptive.  He had never noticed her watching him, why was he noticing boys watching her.

“Malfoy.  He is always looking at you, ever since we started dating.”  Ron explained with a deep frown.  “Maybe I should go explain to him about not looking at other people’s girls.”  Ron said and got up as Harry and Ginny entered the compartment.

“Who is looking at other people’s girls?’  Harry asked as he sat down by the window on the seat across from them, Ginny sat down next to him.

“I think he is complaining about Malfoy again.”  Ginny said and rolled her eyes.

Luna looks between the three Gryffindors with her own frown.  “This is the first I have heard of Draco looking at me.”  She said innocently then looked to Ginny.  “Has Ron been talking about it a lot?”

“He is just fixated on it right now.”  Ginny said with a shake of her head.  “You’ll get used to it after a while.”

“He is constantly looking at her, and you should have heard the rubbish things he has said to  and about her!”  Ron yells and waves his hands about.

“Ron, Malfoy is just trying to get under your skin.  He is doing it just to provoke you.”  Harry said to try and calm down his friend.

“He probably just heard the horrible things I am sure Adrian is saying about me.”  Luna added and took Ron’s hand.  “Can you just not worry about it?  Is it really doing any harm?”  She asked and kissed his cheek.

“I just don’t like the idea of him even thinking about you that way.” Ron said, but smiled at the kiss.  “Luna you have no idea what goes on in guys minds.  You are much too sweet to be in his.”  He told her and kissed her softly.

Luna blushed and looked to the floor.  She felt strange when Ron said things like this to her, it wasn’t guilt exactly, she couldn’t really place the emotion.

Ron pulled her into his arms and let her rest against his chest.  He seemed to favor this position when they were all just sitting around talking, and Luna couldn’t say she minded in the least.

“You know Luna, I think you are good for my brother.”  Ginny said from across the way.  “You seem to be the only thing that calms him down when he is in one of his moods.” She added with a teasing smile.

Ron huffed and pulled Luna in closer.  “Than I am sorry I will not see you guys until we are coming back to school.”  she said and looked up at Ron’s face.  “Please try and not think about it while I am away?” She asked and moved to kiss him on the lips this time.

Ron sighed and nodded.  “I’ll try, but I am not making any promises.  The only thing that makes me feel better is that you are in my arms and not his.”  He told her before he kissed her again.  Now that statement made her feel guilty.

They rode back in the train talking about nothing of real importance.  They just enjoyed each other’s company while they could.  When they got out onto the platform and saw their parents all heading their way Ron turned Luna to him and looked down into her eyes.

“Going to really miss you.”  he told her with a smile before he leaned down and gave her a passion filled kiss right out in front of everyone.  Luna closed her eyes and let herself sink into the kiss until he slowly pulled away.  “Will you write me?”  he asked with a smile.

“Only as often as you write me.”  Luna said with a knowing smirk.  She gave him one last peck on the lips before she headed off to join her father.

“So are you and the youngest Weasley dating now?”  Her father asked with a curious interest as he looked over to the boy who was just kissing his daughter.

“Yes, I guess we are.”  She said with a shrug.

The two weeks of break were spent camping in a deep jungles of South America, and Luna loved every moment of it.  They didn’t find what they were looking for, but as with all her adventures with her father, that was only really half the point.

She only received one letter from Ron, but she sent him a few in return none the less.  Her Master sent her a letter every other day and their content would make the most jaded person blush.

She was glad to have her own tent because Draco’s letters required privacy to read, for more than one reason.  The day before break ended Luna and her father were settling back into their home when Draco’s letter arrived.

“It is that eagle owl again.”  Her father said as he nodded to the door.  “I assume you will be heading to your room?”  he asked with a smile that made Luna blush.

“Yes, see you for supper?”  She asked as she took the envelope from the owl.

“I invited some of your friends over tonight.”  He informed her for the first time which made Luna stop on the stairs.

“Who?”  She asked feeling sick that he may have invited people that should not see one another.

“The ones staying at the Weasley’s house.  I didn’t think they got along with your other friend.” He said and nodded to the note.  She had forgotten how perceptive her father was as well, which made her blush.

“They don’t, so please don’t mention him?”  She asked her father meekly.  It wasn’t in a Lovegood’s nature to lie, but he would understand keeping the peace.

“Don’t worry, I know how explosive Weasley’s can be.”  her father said, and with one last nod she headed up to her room to read her Master’s letter.

Little Raven,

I do hope you have been enjoying my letters to their fullest.  I have decided since you are back in the country that you would enjoy my company even more.  Tonight I wish to see what your room looks like and thoroughly defile it.  Write back to give me a time I may come over without being caught by your father.

~Master Dragon

The idea of him coming to her room sent a spark of pleasure between her legs.  She was breathing heavy from just the thought of what he could do to her.  She had to take a deep breath to calm down before she went to the door to yell down to her father.

“What time are people coming tonight?”  She called so she would be able to give her Master better details.

“I told them seven to nine.”  Her father called back.

She went over to her desk and started to write her response.


My father has invited guests over for supper tonight.  They will be leaving around nine so it would be best if you didn’t come until ten.

~Little Raven

Once that was complete Luna headed down stairs to get her father’s owl so she could send the letter on its way.  When the owl returned he had a new message for her.  She took it from his leg and opened it right away.

Little Raven,

Who are your supper guests?  They are making your punishment worse by making me wait.

~Master Dragon.

Luna wondered why every time he wrote or spoke of punishment it sent a thrill through her instead of dread.  She liked being punished by him and he seemed to enjoy doing the punishing, but she put those thoughts aside while she wrote back.


My father has invited some of my friends over because they did not get to see me over break.  As far as I understand it, Harry, Ginny, and the Bitch will be our guests.  Hermione may also be joining us, but I am unclear about this.

~Little Raven

She finished writing and sent the note off.  This time she expected the own to return with a reply, and even told him to wait for one.

My Little Raven,

There is no way you are going to see him before I get to see you.  I will be over in a few minutes and I will stay in your room until they leave.  You will make sure your father has no problem with this.  Exspect me by floo.

~Your Master

Luna swallowed hard as she read the letter and then looked up to her father.  “Would it be okay if my other friend came to visit as well?”  She asked as she folded Draco’s letter.

“I thought that would cause problems?”  Her father asked with a frown.

“He will just stay out of sight while the others are here.”  Luna told him honestly.  “He is just as excited to see me as they are.”  She said and hoped her father didn’t notice her blush.

“If that is what he prefers.”  Her father said with a smile.  “But if he spends the night it will be on the couch.”  he added a bit more firmly.

“I am sure he will go home, if maybe a bit late.” Luna said then rushed to the bathroom to make sure she looked okay before Draco got there.

By the time she came back out she heard Draco and her father talking in the sitting room.  She paused to see what the two men were saying to one another.

“You know she is dating Ronald now?”  he father asked

“I am aware.”  Draco replied stiffly.

“I am fairly certain she would break up with him if you admitted you were in love with her.”  Her father added calmly.

There was a long pause, and Luna was about to enter the room before Draco answered.  “I can’t deny I do have feelings for you daughter Sir, though I would not be so bold as to call them love.”

“Ah, well then you should tell her once you figure out that is what they are.”  Her father said as if it were a sure thing.  Luna shook her head as she knew how off her father really was on this one.  The feelings they shared were not love, but very much its sinful sister lust.

“What have you two been talking about?”  She asked as she walked into the room.  Draco looked relieved to see her, her father was obviously making him uncomfortable.

“Nothing important.  We have an hour until your other friends show up, so show me your room.”  Draco commanded in his most polite tone.

She smiled and took his hand before waving to her father.  They soon found themselves in Luna’s bedroom.  Draco spent some time looking around. He picked up a few objects and took in her natural environment for the first time since they started their relationship.  It was a clean space, but far from organized.  The ceiling looked as if it had recently been painted white, thought the rest of the room was a pale blue color.

“Do you actually sleep in that tiny bed?”  Draco asked as he walked over to the twin sized canopy bed.

“It is the same size we have at school.”  Luna pointed out with a smile.

“Well that is at school, you expect to be uncomfortable there.”  he said with his own smile.  “Now, I do think it is time to start defiling this room.”  he said as he approached her like a predator after his prey.

“What did you have in mind Master?”  She asked before she locked and warded the door.

“I’m traditional, we can start with the bed and move from there.”  He said as he caught her around the waist.

“Will you be punishing me before or after supper Master?”  She asked as he pushed the hair from her neck and started to kiss and bite at the skin.

“Before, after will be a reward if you are a good pet.”  he told her as his hands pulled her shirt up over her head.  Her breath caught in her throat as his hands nearly tore her clothes from her.  When he was done her knickers laid in pieces on the floor.

“Master…”  She gasped as he threw her over his shoulder and carried her over to the bed.  “Little Raven missed you.”  She told him breathlessly.

“I missed my Little Raven.”  he admitted as he dumped her on the bed.  “Do I need to tie you up or are you going to take your punishment like a good girl?”  he asked with an evil smirk.

She licked her lips as she tried to think of the right answer.  “What ever would please you more Master.”  She decided to go with the safe choice.

“I’ll leave you free for now, but if you try and get away from your punishment I will just have to add more.”  He told her as his smirk just widened.

“Yes Master.”  She said and wondered what her punishment was going to be.

“Lay back on the bed and close your eyes.  I want you to keep them closed unless I tell you otherwise, do you understand pet?”  he asked and she quickly got into position.

“Yes Master”  She answered and closed her eyes tightly.

She felt his hands on her knees and he moved her legs so she was completely open to him.  “I can see my little pet is already looking forward to this.”  he told her with a chuckle as he noticed her arousal.

Luna swallowed and blushed as she turned her head away from him.  She heard him chuckle again.  “I’ve decided to decorate your front today, but I want you to count each lash.  You will stay focused on each new pain I give you.  Do you understand pet?”  He asked as he ran his hands down her body.

“Yes Master.” She said and licked her lips in anticipation.  She soon felt the sting of his riding crop just under her breast.  “One Master.”  She gasped and her hips rolled.

The second lash landed above her other breast.  The third made her scream by landing directly on her overly excited nipple.  She moaned and screamed as he gave her twenty lashes to her breasts, and by the time he was done they were nothing my bruises and welts.

When he was doen his ran his hands over his work which made her flinch and moan.  “Wearing a bra down is going to be hell.”  he told her with a chuckle before he licked her heated skin.  “But that is a part of your punish.”

She could feel him moving between her eyes.  “Watching you twitch and moan has made your Master hard.”  he told her before he sucked her nipple into his mouth.

She gasped and arched her back, all the while making sure she kept her eyes closed. “But you should know your real punishment is yet to come.”  he told her as he moved up her form.  “Keep your hands above your head.”  he ordered before kneeling and pulling back from her.

“What is my punishment Master?”  She whimpered as she felt he may leave her like this.

The next thing she felt was his hardened cock slipping against her wet folds.  She licked her lips and gasped as her hips tried to move to meet him.  “You will see pet.” he said before leaning back down and licking at her neck as his sunk himself into her slowly.

Taking her like this always felt so right.  He was slow at first as they both got used to the union and just enjoyed themselves, but as the clock neared seven his strokes started to speed up and become more rough.  “Don’t you dare come until I say so.”  he groaned and Luan nodded unable to speak.

She jerked under him as her hands wanted to reach out and take his shoulders.  It was almost painful to keep herself on the edge when all her body wanted to do was fall over it.  When it was only a few minutes before her friends were supposed to arrive Draco found release in his pet.  Luna waited for his command, as her body twitched with need for release.

When he pulled out of her she found that she was crying in frustration.  “Master?”  She whimpered under him.

“That is your punishment.”  he said as he pulled himself completely away from her.  “Cool yourself down and get dressed.  Your friends won’t be much longer.”  he said as he cleaned himself up with a spell.

She was still whimpering on the bed when her father called up to tell her her friends had arrived.

It took her another ten minutes to calm herself and dress to go see her friends.  Draco did not permit her a cleaning spell because he wanted his seed inside of her when she saw Ron.  She made her way down the stairs and tried to walk as naturally as she could.

The moment she stepped into the sitting room Ron picked her up and swung her around happily.  She smiled back at him and kissed him softly on the lips before he put her down.  She heard giggling from behind him and looked around to see Ginny smiling brightly at her.

The supper was an event filled with laughter and smiles.  Luna couldn’t find a comfortable way to sit, but she didn’t let that get in the way of spending time with her friends.

When it was finally time for them to head home Ron pulled her away from the others so they could have a few private moments.  When they were in the hallway he just smiled a goofy smile at her before kissing her softly.

“See you on the train tomorrow?”  he asked and ran his fingers through her hair.

“Yes.”  She told him simply and leaned up to kiss him once again.  “I have missed you Ronald.  I wish you would have written more.”  She teased and smiled as he blushed.

“I meant to, the days just got away from me.”  he told her sheepishly.  “See you tomorrow.”  he said and kissed her one last time before he head out with the other.

Once they were gone and told her father she and Draco would be spending a few hours talking in her room before he headed home as well then went up to see what he had been up to the whole time.

“I brought some food Master.”  She said as she opened the door.

Draco smiled and shook his head.  “I packed food.”  he said as he looked up from her desk. He placed the book he had been reading back in his bag and turned to her.  “How was supper with the Bitch and friends?”  he asked with a grin.

“Fun.”  She told him honestly as she moved to him and knelt at his feet.

“You took your punishment very well.” he complimented her as he ran his fingers through her hair.  “Would you like me to heal them for you?”  he asked with a smile.

“No need Master, they are just a bit bruised.”  She said and smiled back up at him.  “I kind of like it Master.”

He chuckled and shook his head.  “I thought you would.  Now, what would you like as a reward?”  He asked as he played with the ends of her hair.

“I only wish to bring you more pleasure Master.”  She told him simply.

“Oh you will.”  he promised with a smirk.

When You Review


When I woke up this morning I found that I had a few new reviews to my story The Smell of Submission.  Now I don’t know about other fanfic writers, but my muse tends to really live off reviews.  So of course I got on the website and read the reviews without delay!  The content of those reviews led me to start thinking about the process I go through when I read both good and bad reviews.  So I decided to share my thoughts.

When I get a good review my first reaction is a little happy flutter in my stomach that I have pleased my readers.  (Have I mentioned that I am a submissive?) This reaction is usually followed by a urge to write more so I can please my readers more, and in turn get more positive feedback.

When I get a bad review my process is a little longer.  My first reaction is to feel ashamed that I have upset one of my readers.  This is usually followed by the urge to go hide and not write any more.  Over the years of writing I have learned to push past this urge to truly examine the review to see how valid it is.  The first question I ask myself is, does the reviewer have something constructive to say. If the answer is no I have learned to push that review aside and ignore it (mostly).  The second question I ask myself is, if the reviewer has the same goals in the story that I do.  Many times I disregard reviews because the reader is looking for a different story than I am writing and I have learned to recognize those times.  I wish I could please everyone all the time, but the simple fact is, I can’t and I have learned to accept that (mostly).  If the answer to my second question is yes, the reviewer has the same goals in my story that I do, that is when I really look at the review from all sides and consider how I can learn from it.

This is what happened with the two reviews I received this morning.  Both of the reviewers had points and I realized that I was not making some things clear enough in the most recent chapter I had written.  So in response to these reviews I decided to edit the chapter in question to make the story a bit more clear.

If you have already read Chapter 11: Harry’s Girls, You may want to reread it later today once I have edited and updated the content.