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This is just a quick post to let everyone know I put the final chapters of Quidditch Lesson up and I also posted chapter 2 of The Nine Tribes: Unrest.  My plan for the rest of the day is to try and finish chapter 2 of Face of War, but I am not making any promises.

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New Update

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So I haven’t figured out how to make a chapter NOT take over the whole front page if I post it as a post.  So new plan, I will be be just posting them as pages and write a post that tells you when I new chapter is up.

That being said I will be updating both The Smell of Submission and Quidditch Lesson in a few moments!  Expect another couple of updates to Quidditch Lesson in the near future as I am working on writing the last chapter now, and the second to last chapter is being on hold till my beta has time to read it.

In other news I have decided to pause the Quidditch Lesson series once the first book is done.  I have so many projects right now that something had to give, and between books seems like the best place to pause something.

I feel so bad that Blind Nymph and Face of War have both been on pause for over a month simply because my muse is a pervert…  For those of you who are fans, do not worry they are still being worked on, just slowly.

Side Chapter: Perks

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Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.


Author’s Note: This chapter takes place during Chapter 12 of The Smell of Submission

Warning: The following chapter contains graphic sexual content and general smuttiness

Rating: MA


Perks

Harry closed the door, but didn’t actually leave.  It wasn’t like he wanted to watch the two boys play with his slut, but he didn’t exactly trust them with her alone either.  So he made his way into a corner silently and sat down.  He pulled out a textbook to study while he listened for any sign that he was needed.

“What do you want to do with her first?”  Blaise asked as he licked his lips.  He rubbed his hands together then looked up at the other boy.

“It is so hard to decide really.”  Draco said as he started to unbutton his own shirt.  “I have a lot of stress that hasn’t had any outlet in a while.”  he said as he looked down at the girl.  “I’m the one that got us here, I say I get her first.”  he said firmly before he looked up at his friend.

Ginny opened her eyes and nervously looked between the two boys.  “I… I could take you both… at once?”  She offered before she sucked on her middle finger.  “I’ve been practicing my fellatio, maybe one of you would like to see how I am doing?”  She asked and her eyes settled on Blaise.

“Who would have thought the Weasel’s baby sister was such a little slut?”  Draco asked his friend with a chuckle.

“I’ve actually had a dream like this, only you weren’t here.”  Blaise responded and both boys laughed.  “Lets see what you can do minx.”  he said as he started to unbutton his slacks.

Draco frowned as the girl moved into all fours and crawled towards Blaise.  Though the frown disappeared the moment he got a nice view up her skirt.  He smiled to himself and undid his own pants before moving onto the bed behind her.

“I think I like her suggestion, both at once.”  Draco said as he ran his hand over her smooth bottom.  “And you notice he said we couldn’t damage her.  He didn’t say anything about not hurting her.”  He added with a smack to her butt to accentuate the point.

Ginny moaned at the slight sting of the spank and looked back at Draco with a blush before she looked up to Blaise.  Her stomach was doing nervous little flips, but she pushed passed it.  She was a Gryffindor and she wouldn’t run from something just because it was a bit scarry.

“Did you like that… what did he call you?”  Blaise asked as his ran his fingers through her hair.  “…oh yes, Fuck Toy.  Did you like that little Fuck Toy?”  He asked with a cruel smile.

“Yes…”  She admitted as a flush came to her and down her neck.

Both boys laughed as they moved themselves into position on either side of her.  Blaise took a handful of her hair and tilted her neck back so he could look down into her eyes.  “Do you want to suck my cock?”  He asked as he licked his own lips.

“Yes”  She said breathlessly as she struggled against his hold on her hair.

Draco smirked and shook his head as he watched Blaise play with her.  His hand slipped down between her legs so he could feel how ready she was for him.  When he found her sopping wet he chuckled again which made Blaise look up at him.

“She is practically in heat.”  Draco told his friend and they both smiled down at the girl.  Draco shifted so he could run his hardened member against her wet folds.  “Do you want this too little Fuck Toy?”  he asked teasing her with it.

“Yes”  She moaned and pushed back against him.

“Then you are going to have to beg for it you little slut.  Beg for our Slytherin cocks to fuck you.”  Blaise commanded as he brushed the head of his own shaft against her mouth.

She licked him as he passed, her eyes clouded with pure lust.  “Please fuck me.”  She started as she wiggled her hips back against Draco and struggled against Blaise’s grasp of her hair so she could lick him more.

“Going to have to do better than that.”  Draco said as he smacked her ass a bit harder than he had the last time.

“Please… please fuck me?”  She moaned and jerked as they had their fun.  “Please use me, all I want is to feel your cocks.  Fuck me please?”  She begged all the while trying to get at them to take what she was begging for.

“Well since you asked so nicely.”  Blaise mocked before Draco drove himself inside of her from behind.  She let out a loud moan as she was so suddenly filled.  Blaise took that moment to shove himself into her mouth.  “Now lets see how well you have been practicing.”

She moaned around the cock in her mouth and tongue against the underside of his shaft.  Draco started with a slow strokes into her but was quickly building up speed.

“Merlin, she’s so tight.  You feel so good around my cock.”  Draco groaned as he took a hold of her hips to control his movements more.

Blaise loosened his grip on her hair so she could have more control over how she pleasured his cock.  She pulled back and lapped her tongue over his head before taking him in again.  She started to bob her head onto his shaft.  Each time she pulled back enough so just his head was in her mouth, her tongue licked around it.  With each bob she took him a little deeper until his cock hit the back of her throat and she gagged a bit around him.

The dark Slytherin groaned at the attention she was giving his manhood, when she gagged and chuckled.  “Seems like our slut needs a bit more practice.”  He told his friend.

“I guess we’ll just have to take turns letting her practicing on us until she can do it right.”  Draco said as he gave her a particularly hard thrust.

Ginny moaned around Blaise which made him grin.  “It is the least we could do to help out a fellow student.”  He said as he grip of her hair tightened again.  “Just relax your throat…”

Blaise moaned as he pushed himself deeper into her mouth.  When she gagged again he enjoyed the feeling for a moment before pulling her head back a bit so she could breath.

Ginny gripped the bed tightly and closed her eyes as she tried to do what Blaise wanted.  It was hard to focus on one of them when the other was doing such wonderful things as well.  Each new cock she tried seemed to be enjoyable in its own way.  Soon, as much as they tried not to really hurt her she was being pushed back and forth as each impaled her on the other’s member.  She was slowly getting used to the feel of Blaise in her throat.  She could only relax for so long before she started to gag again, but fortunately the boy didn’t seem to mind in the least.

They took her that way until first Draco and then Blaise found release.  She swallowed Blaise’s seed the way Daphne had taught her, and even licked the mess off his shaft before the boy stepped back.

Draco laid back on the bed to catch his breath.  “So what do you think Blaise, is this little tart worth siding with Potter?”  he asked his friend.

“Her alone?  Not even close.”  Blaise smirked as he pet the side of Ginny’s face.  “But we both know following the Dark Lord isn’t really a safe position for you and your family to be in.  If Potter can actually take the madman down… I would like to be standing on the winning side.”

“It may be worth a try…”  Draco said and pulled Ginny down on the bed next to him.  “What should we do to you next?”  he asked as he ran his hand down her sweat covered form.

“Plus, the perks of Potter’s side seem much more fun.”  Blaise added as he moved onto the bed after Ginny.

Chapter 12: Allies

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Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.


Warning: The following chapters contain graphic sexual content and general smuttiness

Rating: MA


Chapter 12: Allies

It was Wednesday night and Harry was standing outside of the Room of Requirement.  He had already set Ginny up inside and now he only had to wait to see if Draco would show.  Just in case the blond decided it would be better to betray him Harry decided to wear his cloak just in case a teacher or Filch showed up instead of the Slytherin.

At exactly eleven o’clock Draco entered the hallway, but he was not alone.  Next to him stood a dark skinned boy that Harry had seen before, but didn’t know the name of.  The two of them walked down the hall talking softly, unaware that anyone was around.

“He seems to be late, you sure this isn’t some kind of trap?”  the darker boy asked in a silky tone.

“It might be, but that is why I brought you.”  Draco replied as they moved towards the spot in front of where the door would appear.

“I still don’t know why you are trusting him at all.  He seems to be nothing but a pig headed lion to me.”  The dark boy said as he leaned against the wall.

“You should have heard the things he was saying to Granger, Blaise.  Something is different about him and I want to know what.”  Draco said and looked up and down the hall.

“I came to a realization over the summer.”  Harry said as he pulled the cloak off and shoved it into his bag.

Both boys jumped and drew their wands as Harry seemed to appear out of no where.  Harry put his hands up so they could see his wand was still away and he meant no harm.  When they slowed their wands slowly Harry continued.

“As I was saying, I had a realization over the summer.  If I am going to survive, I need to take my life into my own hands.  I need control.”  Harry said then smiled and looked to Blaise.  “That being said, I don’t know you.”

“This is Blaise Zabini.”  Draco introduced him.  “You told me you wanted allies, Blaise can be almost as useful as myself if you can keep him happy.”  He added smugly.

“You want to be my ally?”  Harry asked the darker boy.

“That depends on two things really.”  The boy replied smoothly.  “What are your goals, and what is in it for me?”  He asked then leaned back against the wall to wait for his answer.

“At the moment I am taking down Voldemort.”  Harry said simply and smirked as both boys flinched at the name.  “After that I am still formulating my plan.”  he added more to himself.  “As for what is in it for you?  I plan to be very good to my knights, at the moment that means pleasure, in the future it will mean power and wealth.”

“Pleasure?”  Blaise asked and eyed Harry for a moment.  “I don’t play for that team.”  He said stiffly like it was a mistake many people had made before.

Harry laughed and shook his head.  “No, that is not what I am offering.  The pleasure is in that room.”  he said and motioned with his head to the empty wall.  “Though I only brought one tonight, you’ll have to share if you both want a go.”  He added and looked between the boys.

The other boys looked at each other and then back to Harry.  “Lets see what you got.”  Draco said and moved out of the way so Harry could open the door for them all.

Once the way was open Harry turned to the two Slytherins.  “Stay out here for a moment, I don’t want to scare her.”  he explained before entering the room.

The room he had left Ginny in was just a big empty space with a large beg in the center of it.  Candles covered the walls to give off an flickering light.  Ginny herself was laying at the end of the bed with her eyes closed, she must have fallen asleep while they were waiting.

She had worn her school uniform without the robe.  It looked like she had tried to look as innocent as possible, in her mary jane shoes and white knee highs.  She even tied her hair up into pigtails.

Gently Harry nudged her awake and she smiled up at him as she opened her eyes.  “You fell asleep my little Fuck Toy.”  he told her in a sweet tone.

“I’m sorry Master.”  She said and blushed as she moved to sit up.

“Do not worry, you will need your energy.”  he told her and pet the side of her face.  “Draco has brought a friend who wishes to play was well.”  He told her as he looked into her eyes.

She swallowed hard and bit her lower lip, he could tell she wanted to ask who, but she was holding back.  Harry played with the idea of telling her, but decided it would be more fun to make her wait.

“Are you ready my pretty whore?”  he asked and leaned down to kiss her lips sweetly.

“Yes Master.”  She said after his lips pulled away.  She positioned herself on the bed so she was laying on her stomach with her back to the door, then pulled a text book she had brought with her to her front so it would seem like she was studying.

Harry laughed and gave her ass one good swat before he headed to go get the two Slytherins.  He opened the door and smiled at them both.  “Now this is just a taste of what I am offering.  You will have to swear loyalty to me to get any more than this.”  he said and moved out of the way so the two boys could enter the room.  Harry closed the door as he let the Slytherins take in what he was offering.

Draco looked over the young girl on the bed and licked his lips.  His eyes moved from milky white thighs to a curved ass.  As his eyes made it to the red hair he realized he knew that particular shade.  “Weaseltte?”  he asked and looked between Harry and the girl.  Was Harry Fucking Potter really offering HIM the Weasel’s baby sister?

“I like to call her Fuck Toy myself.”  Harry said with a smirk, but stayed where he was by the door.

Ginny closed her book and rolled over so she could face the two new boys looking at her.  Harry noticed the relief in her eyes as she saw Blaise and he wondered who she had thought Draco may have brought.  Both boys were frozen in place like they didn’t know how to react to her so Ginny smiled at them both and bit her lower lip shyly.

“I thought you two were here to play?”  She asked in a meek tone.  When the boys still didn’t move Harry chuckled and shook his head.

“It looks like you may have to play alone my little Fuck Toy.”  he said and grinned.

Ginny blushed as she looked to her Master.  She took in a slow breath and sat up so that she could start unbuttoning her shirt in full view of all those in the room.  Once her shirt was open she laid back down and made a show of running her hand up her thigh to her center.

She moaned and arched her back as her fingers started to play with her body in a way she usually did completely alone.  Harry was glad his slut had understood the order and was complying so easily.

The other two boys seemed to come back to themselves as they watched the girl bring herself pleasure.  Draco cleared his throat and looked back to Harry.  “What can we do to her?”  He asked in a somewhat strained voice.

“Anything that won’t damage her.”  Harry said and looked between the two boys.  “If you two are ready then I will be heading to my dorm, send her back when you’re done?”  He asked casually.

Blaise smirked as he looked between Harry and the girl.  “See you later Potter.”  he said as he moved closer to the bed.

Harry pulled out the cloak and slipped it on without the hood.  “Have fun.”  He said before opening the door and putting the hood up.

“We will.”  Draco said and turned his back to the door before heading to the girl still masterbating on the bed as well.


The next morning Harry was sitting in the Great Hall for breakfast when he noticed Ron kept looking over to the Ravenclaw table.  He smiled as he glanced over in the direction Ron was looking.

“So you are thinking about it now?”  Harry asked as he motioned his head towards Luna.  “You should make a move, I think she may like you.”  He told his friend.

“I don’t know…” Ron said as she sounded unsure.  “She is still really strange.”  He pointed out and looked back to his friend.

“In other words you have no clue how to pick up a girl?”  Harry offered with a smile.

“Hey!  Not like you are much better.”  Ron snapped as he turned a bit red.  “I least I’ve had a real girlfriend.”  Ron pointed out.

“Fair.”  Harry said with a shake of his head.  “Though you have to admit she was a bit…”  Harry glanced over to Lavender then back to Ron.  “Scary.”

“I could always ask her if she likes you?”  Hermione said as she rolled her eyes at the two boys.

Harry raised an eyebrow at her and she blushed and cleared her throat.  “That would be brilliant!” Ron said and smiled widely.  “But don’t do it while I am around, and don’t tell her I wanted to know.”  He added quickly.

Harry smiled broadly and shook his head.  “I think you should go do it now.”

“Are you kidding me, she will know we were talking about her!”  Ron exclaimed.

“That is the point, come on Ron I think she will like it.  I mean you is weird, you have to play into that.  Hermione, go and ask Luna if she likes Ron.”  he said in a commanding tone.

Hermione sighed and got to her feet.  “You owe me for this.”  She said to Ron before she glanced to Harry and walked across the room.

“Hey Harry?”  Ron asked the moment Hermione was out of earshot.

“Yeah?”  Harry turned back to his friend.

“What do you think has been up with Hermione lately?”  Ron asked as he glanced over to their friend.

“What do you mean?”  Harry frowned in what he hoped looked like confusion.

“I don’t know she has just been a bit more…”  he started as he was looking for the right word.  “…less bossy.”  He finally decided on.

“Maybe it is the mysterious boyfriend.”  Harry offered with a shrug.

“Maybe.”  Ron said as he thought for a moment.  “It is just… She acts so much more like a girl now, it is confusing.”  He explained with a frown.

Harry frowned as well.  “She is a friend Ron, and she is a girl, that doesn’t mean she has to be a girlfriend.”  He said as he tried to put that idea out of Ron’s head.

“Yeah, you’re right.”  Ron said with a sigh then looked over to where Luna and Hermione were talking.  “She just looks so soft.”  he added after a moment.

“Hermione or Luna?”  Harry asked as he hoped Ron was talking about the latter.

“Luna.”  Ron answered and looked back at his friend.  “Hermione is all… not soft.”  he said with a frown.  “She is too bossy for me anyway.  I think the guy should be in charge and I don’t see anyone taking charge of Hermione.”

Harry chuckled and shook his head.  “So why did you date Lavender?”  he asked with an amused grin.

“Are you going to keep bringing that up?”  Ron asked with a bit of a pout.  “I know it was a mistake, but I’ve learned from it.  Okay?”

Harry nodded and just smiled at his friend.

Hermione didn’t meet up with them until they were leaving to go to their first class.

“So how did it go?”  Ron asked nervously as they headed out to Herbology.

“She said she had never really thought about it before.”  Hermione started which make Ron’s shoulders slump.  “But after we talked a little she said she would have to kiss you to be sure.”

This made Ron smile and perk up.  “Really?  So… that.. that is a good sign right?  Does she want to meet somewhere… or?  How?”  He stuttered as a million thoughts went through his head.

“She said you would have to kiss her.”  Hermione explained.

“That sounds kind of bossy.”  Ron said as if he had stepped on a landmine.

“Just because a girl knows what she wants doesn’t make her bossy.”  Hermione snapped

When Ron moved on ahead to get away from an obviously annoyed Hermione Harry stepped behind her so he could speak into her ear.  “And just because a girl is bossy doesn’t mean she knows what she wants.”


It was a dull day in Herbology.  They sixth year students spent most of glass helping Professor Sprout gather different plants for the first year class after them.  She said it would help review what they had learned over the years but is was mostly dull mindless work.

With that done it was on to Defence Against the Dark Arts, which for once Harry was looking forward to.  He thought it was about time for another chat with the dark professor, he could tell the man knew things about what both Voldemort and Dumbledore were up to, and Harry was tired of being caught in the middle.

Class went well enough as they started to learn about silent spells.  Harry thought it was a talent that would come in handy in the future so he listened closely as the Professor explained how it was done.

Ron and him were teamed up to practice, but by the end of class the best either could do was whisper their spells.

Once class was over he told Ron and Hermione to go on without him so he could have a private word with the Professor.  When the last student left Snape looked up at Harry still sitting at his desk.

“Do you need something Potter?”  The dower man asked with a raise of his eyebrow.

Harry thought for a moment of how he wanted to play this interaction, he decided mostly honest would be his best bet.  “Professor Snape, I have been thinking a lot since our last talk.”  He said and slipped off his stool so he could approach the other man’s desk.

“Have you?  It seems you have done more of that in the last month than your first five years at this school put together.”  Severus quipped.

“I can see where you would get that impression Sir.”  Harry said, again not rising to the bait.  “But I wanted to tell you Sir, that I…”  he took in a deep breath and frowned as he looked at the other man.  “I forgive you.”

“You what Potter?”  The Professor asked as if searching for the mockery in the boy’s tone.

“For the actions taken by you that caused my parents deaths, I forgive you.”  Harry told her completely seriously.  “But only if you stop looking at me and seeing my father.  I know he wasn’t perfect.  I understand the things he put you through.  I don’t know how much you know about my life outside of these halls…”

“You can stop right there Potter, what exactly is this about, what do you want from me?”  Snape asked, and he looked like he was on the edge of throttling something.

“Mostly?  I want us to be honest with each other Sir.  I am tired of living in the dark and being a pawn in someone elses game, aren’t you?”  Harry asked with a frown.

“I am not a pawn Potter.”  The man said as he shifted to a deadly calm.

“At most you’re a knight.”  Harry countered and crossed his arms over his chest.

The Professor opened his mouth to say something just as the next class started to enter the room.

“Later Potter, we will speak of this… later.”

When You Review

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When I woke up this morning I found that I had a few new reviews to my story The Smell of Submission.  Now I don’t know about other fanfic writers, but my muse tends to really live off reviews.  So of course I got on the website and read the reviews without delay!  The content of those reviews led me to start thinking about the process I go through when I read both good and bad reviews.  So I decided to share my thoughts.

When I get a good review my first reaction is a little happy flutter in my stomach that I have pleased my readers.  (Have I mentioned that I am a submissive?) This reaction is usually followed by a urge to write more so I can please my readers more, and in turn get more positive feedback.

When I get a bad review my process is a little longer.  My first reaction is to feel ashamed that I have upset one of my readers.  This is usually followed by the urge to go hide and not write any more.  Over the years of writing I have learned to push past this urge to truly examine the review to see how valid it is.  The first question I ask myself is, does the reviewer have something constructive to say. If the answer is no I have learned to push that review aside and ignore it (mostly).  The second question I ask myself is, if the reviewer has the same goals in the story that I do.  Many times I disregard reviews because the reader is looking for a different story than I am writing and I have learned to recognize those times.  I wish I could please everyone all the time, but the simple fact is, I can’t and I have learned to accept that (mostly).  If the answer to my second question is yes, the reviewer has the same goals in my story that I do, that is when I really look at the review from all sides and consider how I can learn from it.

This is what happened with the two reviews I received this morning.  Both of the reviewers had points and I realized that I was not making some things clear enough in the most recent chapter I had written.  So in response to these reviews I decided to edit the chapter in question to make the story a bit more clear.

If you have already read Chapter 11: Harry’s Girls, You may want to reread it later today once I have edited and updated the content.

Welcome?

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Welcome to submissivefox.com!  I am Wild Kitsune.  Wild not only means undomesticated, and feral, but also uncontrolled.  Kitsune means fox in Japanese.  It also refers to a Japanese folktale of a fox spirit with multiple tails.  I picked this name because I feel it describes me.  I am a submissive, but I am also feral.  I like to be bound, but I don’t ever wish to be tamed.  I am playful and tricky, and you may wish to watch out because I DO bite.

This blog is a place for me to express my fantasies in several ways.  First I will be posting my fan and other fiction.  I plan to keep posting them on FF.net, and AFF.net as well but this is a place I can bring them all together.  I also plan to write about my thoughts and life events as I explore more of my own submissive and masochistic side.

Welcome again and I hope you enjoy reading!